Ok this is the chapter 2 of the story I’m writing, hope you like it!
Who Killed Sandy?
Chapter 2 – Why, Why Did You Leave Me?
Dear Diary,
I guess I’ll be writing in you more now. In memory of Sandy and because I don’t have anyone else to talk to anyway. Why did Sandy leave me? I guess it’s not her fault. But I don’t even know who to blame. Maybe, maybe it’s me. If I hadn’t left her alone… I called the police as soon as I saw the sight. The hospital couldn’t save her. It was too late. Just too late.
-Lorraine
Suddenly, Lorraine hears a knock on the door. Half-hoping that it’s Sandy, she opens the door. A man in a brown suit is at the door. “Hello ma’am. Are you Lorraine Miller?” he asks.
“Yes, who are you? Please hurry up.”
“I’m Detective Matthews, but you can call me John, and I’m here to investigate about the death of Sandy Rudyard. “
“Oh. Please help, please do. I want to find the bastard who killed Sandy!”
“Yes ok, but first, let me check the site.”
“Ok.”
John makes his way in and checks the site. After some time, “Hmm… This was a well planned out murder. I can’t find any clues.”
“What really?! Please search harder! Can I search? Or else send someone else!”
“I’m sorry ma’am, but I’m the best detective in the department.”
“Please leave now Detective Matthews. I need to be alone.”
“Ok ma’am.”
Dear Diary,
The bastard who killed Sandy did not leave a single clue or trace. I don’t even know who to trust anymore. There may be some traces… But I can’t check. If I get caught, it’ll be worse. But, I want to do something… I’ll address myself as Lorrie from now onwards. In memory of Sandy.
-Lorrie
Lorraine slept yet another restless night.
Ok, hope you liked it! It was kinda short, but I want to end on a kind of suspenseful note(kinda).
~Renee

Love this!!!
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Really good 👍
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This is a good story!!! But I have one suggestion: it could be just a teensy bit better if you made the chapters longer😜
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Thanks for the compliment! I’ll try, I guess
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☺️😜 when’s chapter 3 coming out?
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I’m on it now 😄. Also, please send a question on my Q ‘n’ A post 😁
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Okay!! Here’s my question!
Why did you start your blog?
Do you like going to school?
Have you ever skipped school?😂
What is your favourite thing about blogging?
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Ok thanks! I’ll answer your question in my answers post!
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😉
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Loving it so far 💗
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Thanks 😊☺️
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Wow, it’s really good. I loved reading it.
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Oh really! Thanks a lot 😊😁
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