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Who Killed Sandy?
Chapter 5 – Too Many Similar Vans
Dear Diary,
It’s Friday! Finally, John will bring the pictures. I can’t wait. Only 8 hours left! Finally, I’ll avenge Sandy. Ok, I have to get ready now.
-Lorrie
At 3, John comes and shows Lorraine some pictures of the vans.




“Oh… I really can’t remember… I’m so sorry. I want to do anything I can to catch the criminal…” says Lorraine.
“Oh really? Are you sure?”
“Yes, I’m very sorry…”
“Oh ok…”
John leaves.
Dear Diary,
I’ve decided to do a bit of investigation of my own. My plan is to call everyone in Sandy’s phone book and question them all. I hope I can find the criminal now. Fingers crossed.
~Lorrie
After an hour, *In her head* “I’m so tired… But I have to question them all. Till now, I didn’t find anyone suspicious… Oh well. I’ll just complete the entire book.”
After another hour, *In her head* “Oof. I didn’t find anyone yet. I guess this last contact called Mr. Tresford is left. I’ll call him now. Hopefully, he has something to say.”
Lorraine calls Mr. Tresford. “Hello? Who is this? What do you want?” says Mr. Tresford.
“Hello. I’m Lorraine. Sandy’s friend. I believe you know her.
“Oh! Sandy’s friend? I’m very sorry about her death.”
“Yes thanks. I wanted to ask you about Sandy’s death. Do you know who could have killed her?”
“Oh. Let me think… I’ll call you in some time and let you know.”
“Ok.”
After half an hour, the phone rings. Lorraine picks it up, to find Mr. Tresford on the line. “Hello Lorraine. It’s Mr. Tresford here. I think I may have a lead. Well, by lead, I mean someone who may know who killed Sandy.”
“Oh really? Please do tell.”
“Well, her father had a childhood friend and his friend’s daughter, named Erina became Sandy’s childhood friend. But one day, the family just stopped meeting the Rudyard family.”
“Oh! Thank you. Do you have Erina’s number?”
“No, but I have her address. She lives close by to you.”
“Oh ok thanks please do tell.”
Mr. Tresford tells Lorraine Erina’s address and the conversation ends.
Dear Diary,
Sandy knew someone called Erina. I have decided to meet her on Sunday at 4. After all this, I’ve decided that I’m going to go and get another job. To pay for the rent. To finally pay. Once and for all. After so much of Sandy’s insisting.
-Lorrie
Ok so that’s it for now, chapter 6 coming soon. Also, I’ll do another picture summary in the second last chapter.
~Renee

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