Day: August 17, 2020

Who Killed Sandy?(Chapter 6)

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I’ll just get right into the story.

Who Killed Sandy?

Chapter 6 – Two More Siblings

Dear Diary,

It’s finally Sunday! I’ll be meeting Erina today! I can’t wait. That is the sentence I have used the most. I can’t wait to find the lead, I can’t wait to find the criminal. I can’t wait to meet Sandy. Ok, I have to get ready to go.

-Lorrie

Lorraine goes to Erina’s house. She rings the door bell and the door slightly creaks open. A voice comes from inside. “Who’s there?” says Erina.

“I’m Lorraine. Sandy’s friend.”

“Please go away.”

“It’s related to Sandy’s case. Please, let me in. Please.”

“Ok….”

In Erina’s house, “Ok, what do you want? Tell me quick.” says Erina.

“Do you know who could have killed Sandy?”

Silence spreads in the house. Erina’s eyes become alarmed.

“Um, Erina? Are you ok? Do you want…”

“So that’s why you’re here, huh? I guess I’ll just have to face my past.” Erina interrupts.

“You may think that Sandy has only a younger sister named Sally, right?” says Erina.

“Um, yes.”

“Well, you see, before, Sandy had a sister 4 years older than her named Katie and a brother 1 year older than her named Samuel.”

“WHAT?!”

“Yes, it’s true.”

“SANDY NEVER TOLD ME THAT!!! I DIDN’T EVEN EVER SEE THEM WHEN I WENT TO THE RUDYARD MANSION!!!”

“Please, hear me out first Lorraine.”

“Ok…”

Erina takes a deep breath and starts telling her story.

“Sandy and I were childhood friends. We always played and hung out with each other. Our parents were good friends too. One night, at the age of 17, I was having a sleepover with Sandy, when in the middle of the night, I wanted to drink some water. Everyone was sleeping while I made my way to the kitchen. I was passing Katie’s room when……”

Silence spreads in the house.

“Um, Erina?’

“Oh yes sorry Lorraine. It’s a hard thing to face your past. So, I was passing Katie’s room, when I saw a horrible sight. Katie was killed.”

“WHAT?!?!”

“Yes. I let out a huge scream and everyone came rushing in. My parents came too. Sandy, Sally and I were rushed and closed up in Sandy’s room. We could hear whispers and weeps outside. Sandy and Sally were crying too. I did my best to comfort them. Finally, after an hour, we were brought out. Only my parents and Sandy’s parents were there. Sally and Sandy went with their dad inside. It was at that time, that Mrs. Rudyard threatened us not to tell anyone about this. I was just 17. Of course I was scared. My parents were scared by her threatens too. We were too scared. That’s why, I stopped meeting her. My parents stopped too. Our friendship was over. The Rudyard family never told us who killed Katie. But I’m tired of keeping it a secret. I’m trusting you with it. Make good use of it.”

“Oh my god. That must be so hard on you. Are you ok?”

“Yes, I’m fine, now that I’ve faced my past.”

“Thank you so much for the information. I’ll make sure that you don’t regret it.”

“Yes.”

Lorraine bids Erina goodbye and goes home. Then, she calls John over the phone and tells him everything. He thanks Lorraine for the extra investigation and the conversation ends.

Dear Diary,

I’m so glad that I’ve gathered so much information. I’m so close! But, this is all for Sandy. If you are reading this, Sandy, that means I came to heaven and I’m showing you my diary right now. Thank you for this gift, Sandy. It has helped me.

-Lorrie

Suddenly, Lorraine’s phone rings. She picks up the call, to find Sally on the other line. “Hello Lorraine.”

“Hello Sally.”

“I need to tell you something important.”

“Sure, what is it?’

“It’s related to Sandy’s death.”

“Oh! Tell me quick! I need to tell you something too.”

“Can you please come here tomorrow at 4:30?”

“Sure.”

The conversation ends.

Dear Diary,

Sally has something important to tell me. I hope it helps with Sandy’s case. I can’t believe the Rudyard family had such a past. Wait. If Sally is telling something, it must be related to what Erina told me. Maybe, SHE KNOWS WHO’S THE KILLER!!! Yes! I’ll finally catch that bastard!!! But, I shouldn’t get my hopes up. But still, I can’t help but get butterflies in my stomach. Oh well, it’s time to sleep.

-Lorrie

All right, that’s it for now, and I’m conforming, next chapter will be the second last chapter. So, YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD.

~Renee

Who Killed Sandy?(Chapter 5)

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It’s the picture special! Let’s just get right into the story.

Who Killed Sandy?

Chapter 5 – Too Many Similar Vans

Dear Diary,

It’s Friday! Finally, John will bring the pictures. I can’t wait. Only 8 hours left! Finally, I’ll avenge Sandy. Ok, I have to get ready now.

-Lorrie

At 3, John comes and shows Lorraine some pictures of the vans.

“Oh… I really can’t remember… I’m so sorry. I want to do anything I can to catch the criminal…” says Lorraine.

“Oh really? Are you sure?”

“Yes, I’m very sorry…”

“Oh ok…”

John leaves.

Dear Diary,

I’ve decided to do a bit of investigation of my own. My plan is to call everyone in Sandy’s phone book and question them all. I hope I can find the criminal now. Fingers crossed.

~Lorrie

After an hour, *In her head* “I’m so tired… But I have to question them all. Till now, I didn’t find anyone suspicious… Oh well. I’ll just complete the entire book.”

After another hour, *In her head* “Oof. I didn’t find anyone yet. I guess this last contact called Mr. Tresford is left. I’ll call him now. Hopefully, he has something to say.”

Lorraine calls Mr. Tresford. “Hello? Who is this? What do you want?” says Mr. Tresford.

“Hello. I’m Lorraine. Sandy’s friend. I believe you know her.

“Oh! Sandy’s friend? I’m very sorry about her death.”

“Yes thanks. I wanted to ask you about Sandy’s death. Do you know who could have killed her?”

“Oh. Let me think… I’ll call you in some time and let you know.”

“Ok.”

After half an hour, the phone rings. Lorraine picks it up, to find Mr. Tresford on the line. “Hello Lorraine. It’s Mr. Tresford here. I think I may have a lead. Well, by lead, I mean someone who may know who killed Sandy.”

“Oh really? Please do tell.”

“Well, her father had a childhood friend and his friend’s daughter, named Erina became Sandy’s childhood friend. But one day, the family just stopped meeting the Rudyard family.”

“Oh! Thank you. Do you have Erina’s number?”

“No, but I have her address. She lives close by to you.”

“Oh ok thanks please do tell.”

Mr. Tresford tells Lorraine Erina’s address and the conversation ends.

Dear Diary,

Sandy knew someone called Erina. I have decided to meet her on Sunday at 4. After all this, I’ve decided that I’m going to go and get another job. To pay for the rent. To finally pay. Once and for all. After so much of Sandy’s insisting.

-Lorrie

Ok so that’s it for now, chapter 6 coming soon. Also, I’ll do another picture summary in the second last chapter.

~Renee

A Letter To My 16 Year Old Self

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Hey! I got this idea from My days in Montana. Be sure to check out her blog too! Let’s get right into it!

Read only on 17th August 2024

Dear 16 Year Old Renee,

How are you? Are you doing well in school? YOU STILL HAVE FRIENDS, RIGHT?!?!?!XD XD XD. Are you being good to everyone?(Except your sister obviously XD).

Do you still detest her?XD. I wouldn’t believe it if you don’t XO.

Are you still blogging? You are, RIGHT?! Please be blogging! It’s so fun! Do you remember ‘Who Killed Sandy?’? It was fun writing it, right? It was the first story you shared with le public XD XD.

How’s your YouTube channel? Has it flourished nicely? Or do you still have only 14 subscribes XD #ForeverAlone.

Do you still like wearing an anklet XD?

Did you get braces? You don’t look ugly, RIGHT? The dentist told me that I’ll get braces soon, so I’m just asking. Did your friends tease you? Oh no. IT MEANS NEVER-ENDING TEASING FROM YOUR SISTER NOOOOO!!!!!XD XD XD.

Do you still like drawing? Wait, DID YOU DO THE ELEMENTARY EXAM?! YOU DID, RIGHT?!?! XD XD. How much did you get? Do you still like Math?

Are you famous? Of course not!XD XD XD!

Ok then, I guess you are a bit free since you’re done with 10th Standard. Now new school, new friends. But don’t forget the old ones. Ok then, I guess your laughing right now XD XD. Wait, is XD still used?! If not, XD XD XD XD XD XD XD TIMES INFINITY + XD XD XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok then, bye 16 year old Renee

~12 Year Old Renee

Ok so that’s it for the letter. You must have learnt more about me XP. Ok then. Toodles!!

~Renee

I’ve Added Pages!

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Hey all! I have added some pages. I’ve added a contact page to email me, an about me page, though I have already posted something like that, a let’s play roblox page, for playing roblox with me and finally, a chat page for group conversations! Anyway, thanks for liking and following and goodbye! Hope you like my story too!

~Renee

Who Killed Sandy?(Chapter 4)

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Let’s just get right to the story.

Who Killed Sandy?

Chapter 4 – The Rudyard Mansion

It’s 5 o’clock, and Lorraine is eagerly waiting. Then, the doorbell rings. Lorraine opens the door and sees John in front of her. “Sorry if I’m a bit late.”

“No problem. Shall we go?”

“Yes, come with me, let’s go in my car.”

“Ok.”

They drive to the Rudyard Mansion. At the entrance, a scanner detects them and a voice comes from it. “What is your purpose here?”

*In Lorraine’s head* “Oh… I guess after Sandy’s death, her family became very depressed. Usually, as soon as they saw me, they would welcome me with open arms.”

“Hello, it’s Lorraine here, and Detective Matthews has come with me to investigate about Sandy’s case.”

“Ok, come in.”

Lorraine and John go in the mansion. There, Sally welcomes them. “Hello Lorraine and Detective. Please take a seat. My father will come shortly.”

“Hello Sally. How are you doing?”

“I guess I’m doing well.”

Then, Mr. Rudyard comes into the room. “Hello Lorraine. Hello to you too Detective Matthews. How are you doing, Lorraine?”

“I’m doing well. How are you?”

“I’m fine too. But, this has been a huge blow for Cassandra. The poor woman has been in her room the whole time.”

“Oh, that’s too bad.”

“Can you please call her out? It’s something important related to Sandy’s case.” says John.

“That will be hard. But if it’s related to Sandy, surely.”

After some whispered voices, Mrs. Rudyard comes.

*In Lorraine’s head* “Oh… Even though she’s smiling, I can clearly see that Mrs. Rudyard is very down. Mr. Rudyard is right. This has been a really huge blow for her.”

“Hello Mrs. Rudyard. This is Detective Matthews. He would like to question you all.”

“Oh, are we suspects?” says Mr. Rudyard.

“Yes.” says John.

“Why….. Why would I ever kill my own daughter…. My Sandy…” says Mrs. Rudyard.

“I’m sorry, but I will have to question you all.” says John.

“I WOULD NEVER KILL MY BABY!!!! WHO ARE YOU TO THINK THAT?!?!?!” shouts Mrs. Rudyard and charges towards John. Mr. Rudyard and Sally hold her back. “I’m terribly sorry. She’s just not in a good state.” says Mr. Rudyard.

“Yes, that’s true.” says Sally.

“I’m sorry, but I’ll still have to question you all.”

“I understand.” says Mr. Rudyard. He whispers to Mrs. Rudyard and she calms down.

“Ok, so, where were you all when Sandy was killed?”

“I was sleeping in my room.” says Sally.

“I had a party with my friends in the Rudyard hall, so I was there.” says Mr. Rudyard.

“I was sleeping in my room.” says Mrs. Rudyard.

“Hmm ok. Can I please check out your mansion?” says John.

“Yes sure.” says Mr. Rudyard.

“You come too, Lorraine.” says John.

“Ok.”

They search the whole mansion for an hour. “Ok, I haven’t found anything. I guess the family is off the suspects list.” says John.

*In Lorraine’s head* “Oh that’s good!”

“Ok!” says Lorraine.

Everyone bids their goodbyes and Lorraine and John leave the mansion. In the car, they start talking. “So, Lorraine, my department found many pictures of dull green vans with R.S. in red written on them.”

“Oh really?”

“Yes.”

“Oh ok.”

“So, I’ll bring by the pictures at say, 3 on Friday?”

“Ok. But I’m not sure if I’ll be able to figure it out. It was a bit blurry.”

“That’s fine, let’s just try.”

“Ok.”

“Here you go. We’ve arrived to your house.”

“Oh ok thanks.”

“Bye Lorraine.”

“Bye John.”

And so, John drives away and Lorraine goes in her room.

Dear Diary,

Thankfully, her family were not the criminals. I’m so glad for that. I’m waiting for John to bring the pictures. I really want to catch the person who killed Sandy. I can’t wait. I’ll also keep on writing in you till my last breath. I’ll die with you and hopefully, you’ll come with me, in heaven and I’ll show you to Sandy.

-Lorrie

Ok, that’s it for now. Next chapter, I may or may not keep pictures of the vans. So be ready for pictures and be ready for no pictures XD.

~Renee

My Q ‘n’ A Answers

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These are all the answers to the questions y’all sent to my Q ‘n’ A post. So here we go…

KS Blogs

What songs would you choose if you made an album?

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 🤔🤔🤔. I guess I would make a favourites album. I think it would have:-

1. Believer(Imagine Dragons)

2. Thunder(Imagine Dragons)

3. Faded(Alan Walker)

4. Shape Of You(Ed Sheeran)

5. Riders On The Storm

6. Let Me Love You(Justin Bieber)(maybe, maybe not)

7. Closer(maybe, maybe not)

8. Friends (Marshmello)

9. Happier(Marshmello)

10. Wolves (Marshmello, Selena Gomez)

I guess that’s it.🤷 Though I would create a whole different album for Hindi and Marathi songs.

Heart talk with vani

How are you spending time in the lock down??

Hmm. Hard to say. I mean sure, school gives activities but….. Hmmm….. You see, I’m at my grandparents house in Nagpur, while my house is in Pune, so I miss my friends back there. The thing is, I have two options, either stay in Nagpur till Diwali ends, or go back after Ganesh Chaturthi and come back in time for Diwali. But, if I go back after Ganesh Chaturthi, my friends will be gone. Even though I know that, I still miss home. So yeah, that’s how things are. I’m sorry if I made you sad😅(or rather bored you XD). But let’s be happy!!!

Btw, I like this movie a lot. It’s called Whisper Of The Heart and I like all these Ghibli animes.

A Curly Sue’s Ramblings

Why did you start your blog?

Hmm… Well, my dad recommended that I start blogging to showcase my drawings and crafts. At first, I was hesitant (I don’t know why XD), but then, I decided to do it. Then I spread the blog more and more till where I have reached now. So the reason I started my blog is because of my dad.

Do you like going to school?

Well, I like GOING to school. That means that I enjoy school, but not online classes. I hardly learn a thing online XD. I enjoyed going to tuitions too.

Have you ever skipped school?😂

Well, I have skipped an online class. But by mistake. You see, I have a break from 11:30 to 12:00, but I once mistook it for 11:00 to 11:30, so I ended up skipping that class😅.

What is your favourite thing about blogging?

My favourite thing about blogging is that I’m more outgoing I am online than in real life. I can also meet new people which I can’t do in real life because of COVID-19.

Ok that’s it for A Curly Sue’s Ramblings’ questions.

My days in Montana

Why did you start blogging?

I already answered that in A Curly Sue’s Ramblings’ questions.

How do you not run out of ideas for posts?

Well, it’s not like I don’t run out of ideas. Many times, that happens. So, I make do. Like I created an award and started writing a story. That’s why I don’t have a topic for my blog. I’m sorry if you are not satisfied by my answer😅.

What do you like about my blog?

Well, I guess everything XD. I like how positive, cheerful and friendly you and your blog are. I love all your pictures too!

All right, I guess that’s it for now. If more people comment questions, I’ll add and update the answers in this post. Toodles!

~Renee