I’m not going to chitter chatter XD XD XD.
Part 3
A few days after, in Lorraine’s house…
After telling him what happened…
After two hours, at night…
In the morning…
Ok so that’s it for now! This is a rom-com-com XD XD.(Romance-Comedy-Comic)
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
~Renee
Let’s get right into the comic!
Part 2
After they were done solving the case(that was pretty quick!)…
At the cafe…
After some time…
And so, Lorraine and John exchanged numbers and left for their houses.
I hope you liked the comic till now! I added comedy too! Stay tuned for the next part!
~Renee
Hey!! I’m creating a comic of Lorraine and John’s love story! It will be short though, since man, I’m tired! The parts will also be very short. Ok here we go!!
Part 1
It had been a few months after the case was closed when…
Part 2 coming soon! I hope you liked the comic till now!
Hey all!!!!! Do you guys ship Lorraine and John?? If yes, I can create a love story comic of them!!! So please do comment if you want me to make the comic!!!!!
~Renee
There are going to be bonus pictures!! Let’s get right into the last chapter (btw it’s very small)!
Chapter 8 – Finally, I’m Meeting You
My Dearest Diary,
It’s been 61 years since Sandy died. That’s right, I’m 82 already. Remember my wish to take you with me to heaven? Well, I’m on my deathbed right now. I’ll take you with me. I should give you an update on my life. I have a family with a husband and two children,a girl and boy. Their names are Christie and Ryan. Ryan is writing this while I’m dictating right now. Guess who I married? It was the person who helped me save you! That’s right, John!! What a turn of events! I guess I’m going to die soon. These are my last words to you. Farewell.
– Yours Truly, Lorrie
Ok, that was the bonus chapter (VERY SMALL, I had warned you) Now for the pictures!
So those were the pictures!! Also, do you ship Lorraine and John? I do!! If you too, MAYBE I could create a comic of Lorraine’s and John’s love story!!! Please comment!!! Finally, done with the story and story posts!! Oof, I’m tired!!! XD XD XD!!!
~Renee
Hey, this is the second last chapter with the second character reveal and killer reveal too! SO START READING ALREADY!!!!!XD XD XD XD XD.
Chapter 7 – Family Issues
Dear Diary,
It’s finally the day to meet Sally. Finally. One hour left till I have to go. 59 minutes till I have to go. I’m literally counting the minutes. Others might call me crazy, but I don’t care. I just want to avenge Sandy. I think I should start getting ready now.
-Lorrie
At 4:30, Lorraine goes to the Rudyard mansion. There, Sally welcomes her.
“Hello Lorraine.”
“Hello Sally.”
“You didn’t bring the detective here, right?”
“Yes, but why are you asking?”
“I’m just not comfortable telling this to him. I want to tell this to only you.”
“Ok, so, what do you want to tell me?”
“I think I know who killed Sandy.”
“What?!?! Really?!?!”
“Please, first hear me out.”
“Wait. Is it related to Katie?”
“HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT HER?!?! I mean, I don’t object, but how?”
“Erina told me.”
“Oh. Ok. Yes, it’s related to Katie.”
“Ok, please go on.”
“Katie was killed by Samuel Rudyard.”
“WHAT?!?!?! SAMUEL?! YOUR OWN BROTHER?!?!?!”
“Yes.”
“But how…. what…. why….”
“When we questioned him, he didn’t give a reason. He always was a bit freaky. Like a psycho.”
“Oh. But why didn’t he go to prison then?”
“My family was too ashamed and too scared of spoiling our reputation. So, we abandoned Samuel and never spoke of Katie and Samuel.”
“Oh my god. Your family has such big problems.”
“Yes, that’s what I hate about my family.”
“Thank you for all this information.”
“For Sandy, anything.”
“I’ll take your leave now.”
“One more thing, Sandy was killed on Samuel’s birthday.”
Lorraine goes back home and calls John.
“John, come here right now. It’s urgent.”
“Oh ok Lorraine.”
John comes to Lorraine’s house and Lorraine tells him everything.
“That is a lot of information. Thank you so much Lorraine.”
“I will do anything and everything for Sandy.”
“But, we have a problem.”
“Is it the evidence?”
“No not that, I can manage. The problem is that how can we be sure that Samuel killed Sandy?”
“Hmmmm, let me think. What could be there other than the fact it was Samuel’s birthday…”
After a few minutes of brainstorming, “Wait, I got it John!”
“What is it?”
“The van I had spotted, it had S.R. written on it! Those are the initials of Samuel Rudyard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“Oh my god!! You’re right Lorraine!!!”
“So now we know who killed Sandy, right?!?!?!?!”
“Yes!!!!”
After a few days, in court, “Samuel Rudyard, did you kill your two sisters, Katie and Sandy?” says the judge.
“Yes I did.”
“Why?”
“Because I wanted a birthday present.”
“That is not a valid answer. Jury, what is your decision?”
Whispers here and there in the jury. A man from the jury goes and whispers in the judge’s ears.
“The jury declares Samuel Rudyard as guilty of killing his sisters, Katie and Sandy. Because he killed two lives, his punishment is a death sentence. Case closed.” says the judge.
Lorraine cries tears of ecstasy. The Rudyard family is very happy too.
Dear Diary,
I think that I’m the happiest woman on Earth. WE FINALLY CAUGHT THE KILLER!!! That bastard Samuel. I’m crying right now. But don’t worry, these are not tears of pain and hurt. These are tears of ecstasy, joy and happiness. I have avenged Sandy. I have fulfilled my purpose.
-Lorrie
Ok then!!! That’s the story till now! The next chapter is kind of like a bonus chapter, so you can count this as the last chapter too!(meh, who’ll do that, you’ll just LOVE my story XD XD XD XD XD)
Ok, now for the character reveal 2.
Ok, I hope you liked the characters and the story till now!(oh who am I kidding you LOVE my story XD XD XD XD XD) Chapter 8 coming soon!
~Renee
Hey!!! You might have seen a change in my profile photo! I hope you like it! It has been made by The Beahive. Be sure to check out her blog!!! She can create something like this for you too! For doing that, please read her post. Also guys, I am working on chapter 6.
Now remember, it may be the third last chapter I don’t really know 🤔. But don’t expect that. Just expect that we’re coming closer to the end. Ok then stay tuned for the next chapter see ya!
~Renee
I’ll just get right into the story.
Chapter 6 – Two More Siblings
Dear Diary,
It’s finally Sunday! I’ll be meeting Erina today! I can’t wait. That is the sentence I have used the most. I can’t wait to find the lead, I can’t wait to find the criminal. I can’t wait to meet Sandy. Ok, I have to get ready to go.
-Lorrie
Lorraine goes to Erina’s house. She rings the door bell and the door slightly creaks open. A voice comes from inside. “Who’s there?” says Erina.
“I’m Lorraine. Sandy’s friend.”
“Please go away.”
“It’s related to Sandy’s case. Please, let me in. Please.”
“Ok….”
In Erina’s house, “Ok, what do you want? Tell me quick.” says Erina.
“Do you know who could have killed Sandy?”
Silence spreads in the house. Erina’s eyes become alarmed.
“Um, Erina? Are you ok? Do you want…”
“So that’s why you’re here, huh? I guess I’ll just have to face my past.” Erina interrupts.
“You may think that Sandy has only a younger sister named Sally, right?” says Erina.
“Um, yes.”
“Well, you see, before, Sandy had a sister 4 years older than her named Katie and a brother 1 year older than her named Samuel.”
“WHAT?!”
“Yes, it’s true.”
“SANDY NEVER TOLD ME THAT!!! I DIDN’T EVEN EVER SEE THEM WHEN I WENT TO THE RUDYARD MANSION!!!”
“Please, hear me out first Lorraine.”
“Ok…”
Erina takes a deep breath and starts telling her story.
“Sandy and I were childhood friends. We always played and hung out with each other. Our parents were good friends too. One night, at the age of 17, I was having a sleepover with Sandy, when in the middle of the night, I wanted to drink some water. Everyone was sleeping while I made my way to the kitchen. I was passing Katie’s room when……”
Silence spreads in the house.
“Um, Erina?’
“Oh yes sorry Lorraine. It’s a hard thing to face your past. So, I was passing Katie’s room, when I saw a horrible sight. Katie was killed.”
“WHAT?!?!”
“Yes. I let out a huge scream and everyone came rushing in. My parents came too. Sandy, Sally and I were rushed and closed up in Sandy’s room. We could hear whispers and weeps outside. Sandy and Sally were crying too. I did my best to comfort them. Finally, after an hour, we were brought out. Only my parents and Sandy’s parents were there. Sally and Sandy went with their dad inside. It was at that time, that Mrs. Rudyard threatened us not to tell anyone about this. I was just 17. Of course I was scared. My parents were scared by her threatens too. We were too scared. That’s why, I stopped meeting her. My parents stopped too. Our friendship was over. The Rudyard family never told us who killed Katie. But I’m tired of keeping it a secret. I’m trusting you with it. Make good use of it.”
“Oh my god. That must be so hard on you. Are you ok?”
“Yes, I’m fine, now that I’ve faced my past.”
“Thank you so much for the information. I’ll make sure that you don’t regret it.”
“Yes.”
Lorraine bids Erina goodbye and goes home. Then, she calls John over the phone and tells him everything. He thanks Lorraine for the extra investigation and the conversation ends.
Dear Diary,
I’m so glad that I’ve gathered so much information. I’m so close! But, this is all for Sandy. If you are reading this, Sandy, that means I came to heaven and I’m showing you my diary right now. Thank you for this gift, Sandy. It has helped me.
-Lorrie
Suddenly, Lorraine’s phone rings. She picks up the call, to find Sally on the other line. “Hello Lorraine.”
“Hello Sally.”
“I need to tell you something important.”
“Sure, what is it?’
“It’s related to Sandy’s death.”
“Oh! Tell me quick! I need to tell you something too.”
“Can you please come here tomorrow at 4:30?”
“Sure.”
The conversation ends.
Dear Diary,
Sally has something important to tell me. I hope it helps with Sandy’s case. I can’t believe the Rudyard family had such a past. Wait. If Sally is telling something, it must be related to what Erina told me. Maybe, SHE KNOWS WHO’S THE KILLER!!! Yes! I’ll finally catch that bastard!!! But, I shouldn’t get my hopes up. But still, I can’t help but get butterflies in my stomach. Oh well, it’s time to sleep.
-Lorrie
All right, that’s it for now, and I’m conforming, next chapter will be the second last chapter. So, YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD.
~Renee
It’s the picture special! Let’s just get right into the story.
Chapter 5 – Too Many Similar Vans
Dear Diary,
It’s Friday! Finally, John will bring the pictures. I can’t wait. Only 8 hours left! Finally, I’ll avenge Sandy. Ok, I have to get ready now.
-Lorrie
At 3, John comes and shows Lorraine some pictures of the vans.
“Oh… I really can’t remember… I’m so sorry. I want to do anything I can to catch the criminal…” says Lorraine.
“Oh really? Are you sure?”
“Yes, I’m very sorry…”
“Oh ok…”
John leaves.
Dear Diary,
I’ve decided to do a bit of investigation of my own. My plan is to call everyone in Sandy’s phone book and question them all. I hope I can find the criminal now. Fingers crossed.
~Lorrie
After an hour, *In her head* “I’m so tired… But I have to question them all. Till now, I didn’t find anyone suspicious… Oh well. I’ll just complete the entire book.”
After another hour, *In her head* “Oof. I didn’t find anyone yet. I guess this last contact called Mr. Tresford is left. I’ll call him now. Hopefully, he has something to say.”
Lorraine calls Mr. Tresford. “Hello? Who is this? What do you want?” says Mr. Tresford.
“Hello. I’m Lorraine. Sandy’s friend. I believe you know her.
“Oh! Sandy’s friend? I’m very sorry about her death.”
“Yes thanks. I wanted to ask you about Sandy’s death. Do you know who could have killed her?”
“Oh. Let me think… I’ll call you in some time and let you know.”
“Ok.”
After half an hour, the phone rings. Lorraine picks it up, to find Mr. Tresford on the line. “Hello Lorraine. It’s Mr. Tresford here. I think I may have a lead. Well, by lead, I mean someone who may know who killed Sandy.”
“Oh really? Please do tell.”
“Well, her father had a childhood friend and his friend’s daughter, named Erina became Sandy’s childhood friend. But one day, the family just stopped meeting the Rudyard family.”
“Oh! Thank you. Do you have Erina’s number?”
“No, but I have her address. She lives close by to you.”
“Oh ok thanks please do tell.”
Mr. Tresford tells Lorraine Erina’s address and the conversation ends.
Dear Diary,
Sandy knew someone called Erina. I have decided to meet her on Sunday at 4. After all this, I’ve decided that I’m going to go and get another job. To pay for the rent. To finally pay. Once and for all. After so much of Sandy’s insisting.
-Lorrie
Ok so that’s it for now, chapter 6 coming soon. Also, I’ll do another picture summary in the second last chapter.
~Renee
Hey, I created the characters mentioned until now in Gacha Life! Here you go…
Ok, so, I hope you liked the characters and the story till now. There will also be some pictures in chapter 5, coming soon and in the end. Thanks for reading!
~Renee
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